Rachel Ritfeld on Challenge 5

Rachel Ritfeld on Challenge 5
Rachel Ritfeld on Challenge 5
Rachel Ritfeld on Challenge 5

Desyray: You embodied “free” really well and from that aspect your pictures were nice, but if i didn’t know this was to promote a haircare product, i would not have figured out that this was about hair…. Try to always bring it back to what it is you are trying to sell…

Desyray: You embodied “free” really well and from that aspect your pictures were nice, but if i didn’t know this was to promote a haircare product, i would not have figured out that this was about hair…. Try to always bring it back to what it is you are trying to sell…

Carlie: I love your first picture with you lying down in the grass. You look stunning, Your hair looks great and it could actually be a shot for a haircare campaign. However, I didn’t like the other shots. The styling looked amateur and wasn’t doing anything for me.

Nefertiti: I loved that you went for all the looks but except for ‘strong’ all the others could have been either natural or free or unique. Try to be act out what you are tryin to portray a little stronger. Your shots were a little weak for me this week. Although you looked great, from your write up i was expecting more personality in your shots.

Chassity: Although your poses weren’t all great, your attitude in your shots came across very fierce so for that well done. However, again, if i didn’t know this was about hair, i would not have known from your shots!

Reshonda: Hair looks great, styling great, this could be an editorial shoot. Well done. There is enough emphasis on the hair. Although not all the poses work for me, you are making progress every week and for that i commend you!

Kala: You look fabulous! Your hair is so dominant and fabulous that it’s a hair shoot, without even trying if you know what i mean? You embodied unique well, your energy is the shots feel genuine, you look great! Some of your shots could have been a campaign! Really well done! My favorite for this challenge!

Jalitia: I like your vibe in the shoot, you did show us fierce and i like the effect on the photography, very editorial but i am not sure if that fits with the concept of the shoot and that this about promoting the product also, not just yourself. 

For me the best this week was Kala and my least favorite was Desyray

 

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